First impression: a nice, clean-looking curriculum of someone comfortable with the concept of “using white space”. Not crowding lots of information, but clearly tabulated and using short to-the-point sentences.
A few loose remarks ;)
* Why'd you use the Distiller? Export to PDF is very trustworthy …
* Hot Pink: mmm … I think I like it. But it's tantalizingly close to 100% Magenta (I read it as 2% Cyan, 92% Magenta) — I'd make it a full 100%.
* Garamond Pro for your main text — isn't that a bit too lofty? The other day I chose it for a collection of poems, but for a CV you might want to consider a slightly less formal font — Minion Pro pairs nicely with Myriad Pro. Unless you want to make a personal point by using this font!
* On the other hand, you are using two sans fonts that visually don't match — Helvetica and Myriad. It's OK to use another font for your personal logo/infographic at the top lefts, but your are mixing sanses in your main text as well.
* Multiple-column layout: excellent! It shows you know how to distribute text and images, and are not afraid of making it just a bit more difficult.
* '4 top contributions' — I'd write “Four” in full here.
* Table on page 2: it fits snugly in the allocated “text” area, but it gets very drawn out vertically. You might want to make it just a little bit wider … (that should make it look better; if it doesn't, you might as well leave it as it is).
* Another plus (in my opinion): you used en-dashes between date ranges!
* Write out “BS” in full? (I dunno, calling it “BS” might be comme il faut in the specific area of work you are looking in to).
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