Dot Dot Dot . . .

A few months back, in a column entitled “Check, Please,” I recommended that one thing to scan for before considering a job done was the presence of badly formed points of ellipsis, those series of dots used to indicate missing text, also known as ellipsis points, points of omission, or points of suspension. This begs the question, though, what exactly is a properly formed ellipsis?

Let’s start with what constitutes a badly formed ellipsis. Unfortunately, the worst ellipsis is also the easiest to create, and it comes from using the ellipsis character built into virtually every text font you have (Option-; on the Mac, Alt-0133 in Windows). Its problem is that it’s too small, constrained by the physics of font design to be only one em wide. Three periods in a row look about the same. If the idea of ellipsis points is to indicate an omission, they have to open a space wide enough to visually communicate a gap, and as you can see here, a one em–wide opening in the text just doesn’t cut it:

Tradition based on centuries of settings using metal type dictates that the spacing of the dots of an ellipsis be much wider. These days, the spaces used for ellipses are the equivalents of the fixed spaces found in Adobe InDesign’s Type > Insert White Space menu and QuarkXPress’s Utilities > Insert Character menu. Fixed spaces differ from word spaces in that their widths can’t be altered when lines of type are justified. Which spaces you should use for your ellipses, though, depends on whom you talk to.

The revered manual Words into Type, for example, recommends en spaces. The Chicago Manual of Style prescribes closer spacing, using one-third em spaces (a.k.a. three-to-the-em spaces). Oxford University Press’s Hart’s Rules prefers “spaces of the line,” which is to say, the equivalent of word spaces.
Computerized typesetting has allowed type to be much more tightly set than in the metal-type days, and an aesthetic based on tight spacing rules the roost. In this regime, it’s most common to opt for quarter-em spaces, which are very close (indeed, often identical) to the widths of standard word spaces.

The spacing you choose for your ellipsis points depends on the overall spacing of your text, as well as your taste in ellipses. The following three examples show the most common spacing configurations.

Points of ellipsis must always stick together as a group, and the sequence of dots can’t be interrupted by a line ending. Consequently, the dots of an ellipsis have to be bound together with nonbreaking spaces.

In this type from a newspaper website, the ellipses were created using simple word spaces. This works fine in mid-line, but here the ellipse comes to grief when it’s divided at the end of a line.

Points of ellipsis can appear anywhere on a line, even the beginning. However, their spacing relative to the text around them depends on the meaning of the text.

Ellipses in Mid-Sentence

A three-dot ellipsis appearing in mid-sentence is a stand-in for material omitted from within that sentence. The sentence continues on after the ellipse to end with a period. Such ellipses are preceded and followed by a space whose widths are the same as those between the dots.

An ellipse can occur anywhere on a line, as long as all its dots stick together.

To allow these possibilities, the spaces adjoining the text have to be legal line-breaking points. This is generally easier to accomplish if you use QuarkXPress because the program has two varieties of all fixed spaces: breaking and nonbreaking. [Editor’s note: InDesign CS2 also includes both breaking and non-breaking fixed-width spaces.]

For a three-dot ellipse, you use breaking spaces between the text and the first and last dot, and nonbreaking spaces between the dots themselves. This keeps the ellipse intact in all situations and allows it to appear anywhere on a line, just as if it were an unbroken word.

In InDesign, all fixed spaces are nonbreaking, so an ellipse built using fixed spaces will be bound to the text before and after it, preventing line breaks that would allow an ellipse from either starting or ending a line. To allow a line containing such an ellipse to break correctly, you have to insert discretionary line breaks (Type > Insert Break Character > Discretionary Line Break) after the first and last spaces in the sequence.

With InDesign’s Show Hidden Characters turned on, you can see how the discretionary line break characters have to be positioned to get this ellipse to break correctly. The ellipse is built using one-third em spaces (indicated by a big blue dot over a smaller one), and the discretionary breaks are indicated by the blue vertical bars.

Whatever your preference for spacing your ellipses, this is an unnecessary headache. Here’s a simpler path: Create your ellipses using word spaces.

The first and last spaces can be normal word spaces, and the spaces between the dots, nonbreaking spaces (Type > Insert White Space > Nonbreaking Space: Fixed Width). If you don’t mind the widths of the spaces of your ellipse varying a little in justified text, you can make things even easier by using simple nonbreaking spaces (as opposed to fixed-with ones), for which there’s a keyboard shortcut: Mac: Alt-Cmnd-x, Windows: Alt-Ctrl-x.

To create a word space–based ellipse in QuarkXPress, you can find an appropriate non-breaking space at Utilities > Insert Character > Special (nonbreaking) > Standard Space.

Ellipses at the End of a Sentence

All complete sentences end with some form of terminal punctuation—sometimes a question or exclamation mark, but usually a period—and the same is true for those ending with points of ellipsis. In the case of a direct quotation consisting of a sentence that has been truncated, the ellipsis points indicate an omission before the original text’s sentence-ending period. You indicate this by preceding the ellipsis with a space (just as if it were in mid-sentence) and add the sentence-ending period at the end, as a fourth dot, using the same spacing as for the other periods. As with any other sentence-ending period, the fourth dot of such an ellipse is followed by a normal word space.

If the quotation ends with a complete sentence, but the setting needs to indicate that the original quotation contains additional, omitted text, the period follows the last word of the quotation, in its usual closed-up position. That period is followed by a three-dot ellipsis and separated from it by a breaking spacing or discretionary break character to allow the ellipse to begin a new line if needs be.

In the upper sample, the sentence-ending period appears before the ellipse. In the lower sample, the ellipse is part of the sentence, and the fourth dot is the sentence-ending period.

To allow a line to end before the first dot of a four-dot ellipse, you again have to make sure that the space between text and ellipse is a breaking space or that it’s preceded by a discretionary line-break character (in InDesign).

Do It Yourself

It would be nice to think that whoever prepares the manuscripts you typeset could do some of this legwork for you. In Microsoft Word, Alt/Option-space creates a non-breaking space, so it would be easy for an editor or author to create good-looking word space–based ellipses that will work correctly when imported in InDesign or QuarkXPress. XPress will import the non-breaking spaces by default, but in InDesign you should make sure Show Import Options is checked in the Place dialog box and choose Preserve Styles and Formatting before importing the file.
If you have uncooperative or unreliable authors, or if you want some spacing scheme other than word spaces, it’s DIY time.

For web pages, fortunately, the HTML code for the non-breaking space ( ) is widely supported by web editing programs. Nevertheless, as in printed text, the ellipsis character is used far more often than traditionally constructed ellipses, and usually to much worse effect.

In these online samples, the ellipsis-plus-period in the upper text block is not a pretty sight. As the properly constructed ellipses in the lower sample show, this doesn’t have to be the case.

The preceding illustration shows another problem with using the ellipsis character: It often spaces badly when combined with a sentence-ending period.

Nevertheless, the ellipsis character isn’t a total loss. It can be useful in display type, because spaces look bigger when set in large point sizes. The result is that an ellipse that’s ineffective at text size can look properly proportioned when set very large. But again, if you use a period with the ellipsis character in display type, pay close attention to the kerning between the two, as any variation in spacing among the four dots will be magnified just that much more.

James Felici has worked in the publishing industry for over 30 years. He is the former managing editor of Publish magazine, and written for PC World, Macworld, and The Seybold Report. A renowned type expert, he is the author of The Complete Manual of Typography.
  • Anonymous says:

    I use a simple character style having a period as my character and a +100 set width. Works great for me.

  • Anonymous says:

    Interesting and well presented post, James. Enjoyed it a lot.

    I usually use the standard opt-semi colon ellipses (…) and I am not unhappy with it. If I need to use one at the end of a sentence, I would not add a period. I think three dots are sufficient and it is obvious the sentence is finished. Or unfinished…

    Ray, Melbourne, Australia

  • Anonymous says:

    Can you comment on the improper use of the ellipsis, or is that beyond the scope of this article?
    I find myself using it to indicate a passage of time or to imply the unwritten continuation of a written thought (sort of in place of etcetera) or for an implied thought preceding written words, which, I think, is different than using it for missing text in a quote.

  • Anonymous says:

    Can you comment on the improper use of the ellipsis, or is that beyond the scope of this article?
    I find myself using it to indicate a passage of time or to imply the unwritten continuation of a written thought (sort of in place of etcetera) or for an implied thought preceding written words, which, I think, is different than using it for missing text in a quote.

  • Anonymous says:

    I always tend to add space after 3 periods like this “I’m going to the store… want to come?” I’m a graphic designer and just never thought adjusting periods was a big deal. However, in my opinion, too much space between periods is hard on my eyes. I like a good balance of short spaces between periods. It helps me read a sentence a little bit faster and the fact adding a space after 3 periods make it break a little bit and go to the next word like a pause. Just my opinion…

  • Anonymous says:

    It warms my heart to see that humble points of ellipsis could generate so many comments.
    How you create points of ellipsis is largely up to you. What I’ve described here reflects practices based on hundreds of years of evolving typesetting methods and reading preferences. As long as the spacing among the dots is consistent and logical, you have a lot of flexibility. There are copy-editing rules about spacing a four-dot ellipse, though, and these affect the sense of the text in which they’re used. These are worth knowing and paying attention to. Any good style manual (For example, The Chicago Manual of Style) explains these.
    Being basically copy-editing guides, these books also address how and when to use points of ellipsis from an editorial perspective. As a former copy editor, here’s how I would summarize their use. The word ellipsis is used for any omission from a quoted text, and the convention for making this omission visual is the use of three consecutive periods: the points of ellipsis. This same typographic convention is also sometimes called points of suspension, for just the reason one of you mentioned in your comment: to indicate a break in the flow of any sentence, for rhetorical or dramatic reasons, for example, or to indicate the trailing off of a thought. Points of suspension can also be used in written text that’s trying to simulate the feeling of spoken speech, or internal, unspoken deliberative thought. You just have to be careful not to confuse these two separate uses of ellipsis points. If you try to indicate a pause in a speaker’s presentation by using points of ellipsis, the dots may be interpreted as an omission, that part of the text has been left out.

  • Anonymous says:

    When creating an ellipsis, should the following sentence start with a capital if you’re NOT quoting something?
    i.e. :

    Every time I would start my approach, my entire body would just. . . Stop.

  • Anonymous says:

    I have experimented with the “Alt/Option-space” for microsoft word in an attemt to establish nonbreaking spaces for ellipses in my manuscript, but, so far, I have had no succcess with this working. Please give me “dummy” steps about exactly what to do (which keys to push and when, and exactly what the keys look like on the keyboard, etc.) with regard to my desire to revisit all of my ellipses and getting them to remain together to avoid their separation as in line breaks, etc. Thank you very much.

  • Anonymous says:

    Wow! This is a great read. I’m an avid user of the ellipses and also text it frqeuently to my friends. I hardly use it in my blogs, though, but occasionally it pops in. I would have never thought so much about the meaning of the ellipses and I think what you assert is heavy stuff to think about. The dot, dot, dot does reflect our hesitancy to act, to be assertive, to be sure of something. And while I like to use it for comedic pauses and awkward silence, I have often used it because I wasn’t sure about something. Great read and congrats on making Freshly Pressed!

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